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SasuSaku -My Black Winged Guardian Angel- ch.1

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~Sakura~



   When I received my mission, I just couldn't believe it. Why were they sending me to spy on Akatsuki?! I'm not a good spy. Good spies usually had a special eye jutsu or they were good at escaping. I had neither skill. I'm a medical ninja with a close fighting range. Which is why my mission didn't make sense. Neither the fact they had sent me alone.
   But when you are a ninja there's not much you can do about your missions. I could complain, like Naruto did, but I would probably end up punched by Tsunade-sama. And that hurts like hell. So I just followed the orders. Besides with this entire problem with the 4rd Ninja War, the last thing we had was information. Well, we knew what they were after, the nine-tailed fox that was inside Naruto, but we didn't know how far they would go to get it. But I think they won't stop at anything since I heard they had sent Naruto to an island in a "mission". If they were going to the extreme of hiding him then things must be really messed up.
  I stopped my mind babbling to think what I was doing. According to Tsunade their hideout must be around here, but it must be very well hidden since I didn't see anything. This is when Hyuga members used their Byakugan, too see if they saw chakra somewhere. People like Hinata and Neji who had the Byakugan and like Sasu-. Ok I'll skip that one.
   I didn't know what to do so I stayed there very well hidden –or so I thought- expecting someone to get out of the hideout. But I never thought someone was going to enter the hideout. I never saw that one coming. I didn't feel or hear anyone approaching until he spoke not even 3 meters behind me.
   "Sakura Haruno, huh? What a surprise." The voice said. I had heard that voice before but I couldn't remember where, I was shocked. And the he-knows-my-name thing didn't help. I turned and saw him. He was taller than me; he had an Akatsuki robe, and a twisted orange mask. Now I remember, I saw him when I "declared my love" to Naruto and very stupidly –and without success- tried to kill Sasuke. Madara. Madara Uchiha more specifically. Another thing that didn't help was the fact that I'd thought "Sasuke" and "Uchiha". Those were forbidden words to me.
   "Looking for something?" He asked kindly and at the same time sardonically. I didn't know much about him, but I knew he was an excellent fighter with a freaking powerful Sharingan that made him teleport. And even though I knew it wouldn't help, I attacked him.
   He disappeared in thin air! And then suddenly he was behind me, he grabbed my arm and twisted it painfully, I turned and kicked him, I actually hit him! He flew backwards because of the impact and landed on his feet several meters away.
"You know you won't last long, do you? I don't understand why they sent you to spy. That's not your thing." Madara said.
   Okay one thing was admitting that to yourself and a whole other one it's to have someone else tell you that. I got mad and said. "I bet I can last more than you think."


  

~Sasuke~



"Shut up you idiot!"
"Shut up yourself puddle man!"
"Who are you calling a puddle man?!"
"You, who else?!"
   That had been going on for hours! They just never shut up! It's like having my old team again! Just make Suigetsu blond and Karin pink-haired –and prettier- and you have Team 7 again.  This is what I didn't like. Reminders of the biggest mistake I've made, memories of a past that was better than the present. Too bad I hadn't realized that before I stupidly ran away,
  "Shut up you two!!" I yelled at them.
  They both shut upped. Finally! 2 months outside and hearing them fighting everyday was hell. No, worse than hell.
  "You shouldn't make Sasuke mad guys." Juugo –the calmest one of the team when he wasn't killing- said.
  "Say that to Karin…." Suigetsu said.
  "ME?! You were the one who started everything!"
  "That's not true you-"
Here it comes again.
   "ENOUGH!!!" I took out my sword. "The next person that speaks dies, got that?!"
  They all nodded. Minutes, thank God, in silence passed when we finally got to the hideout. When we entered they all went to their rooms. I went and grabbed a snack –before I died of starvation- and after that went to sleep.
   The next day Madara woke me up, it wasn't early, but I could have slept more.
  "I have work for you, dress and come to the west side." He said and then left.
The west side? That's were prisoners were. Damn it, always giving the dirty work to others. After I took a shower and got dressed, I went to look for him. When I found him I asked. "Geez, can't you kill him yourself?"
  Madara said. "I got more important things to do."
  "Well, at least tell me when you caught him." I demanded, still guessing it was a guy.
  "It was yesterday, spying outside. Before I go, tell me what you found out," he said.
  "They are sending Naruto away to that island you said. Actually they sent him like 9 days ago." I answered.
  "I suppose he's not alone."
   "No, there are ninjas of all places everywhere and the eight-tails is also there."
   "Ok then, finish that, I gotta go."
  "Are you so old now you can't even kill a prisoner?"
He gave me a deadly stare and said. "I have more important things to do. Now stop acting like a spoiled boy and do as I said." He left.
   I hated that phrase. "Do as I said." Made me feel like a slave. I got inside the room, expecting to see a dirty guy. I can't explain the surprise I got when I saw a girl. A familiar girl.
CHAPTER 1

Here is a sasusaku story i've been working on
it's a love story (like most of the sasusaku stories) about how i imagine Sasuke would feel after his revenge and what would happen between him and Sakura.
this is just the first chapter so it may not say much about what'll happen next so plz keep reading to find out
i usually like making long stories and this one is not the exception, i hope you dont get bored:3
plz comment, share your opinion
thanks if you do

CHAPTER 2 ---> [link]

ENJOY ^^
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bk00's avatar
This is alright. You do an okay job capturing the characters.

The major thing that's bothering me is your formatting, it makes it hard to read. You're work would flow better if you gave every line and paragraph a space between, like you did when changing perspectives. That being said, your transitions from character to character could be a little smoother, especially considering since you chose 1st person to write from.

Overall, despite the flaw, I'm intrigued to how to see where you take this. Good job.